Not bad but you're not supposed to upload your Sketch Collab entry to the portal yet.

Even though at the time I wrote this review it had a lower score than mine, I still think that this loop is better than mine, and it would be even more so if it was finished. But I don't see this loop as TOO unfinished. Overall, good job anyway.

No offense, but this loop (if it even is one) is too confusing. I have no idea why people think this is better than mine (even though mine isn't that good too). Next time, try practicing drawing and animating things before you release them to the public.

Okay, let me be honest here. You went back to Retro characters. Nice to see them return, but it would be ok if Rory was with them! Also, too short - but it was funny! Nice backgrounds, and Adrellia Village is finally widescreen! Also, you did not put the next button in the same place. With Rachel and Drake's conversation, you had to go click somewhere else with the next button at times. I will give you 3 stars. Keep the game idea!

There should be a quality button! Half of the time it lags, and the lags has a mind of it's own. If possible, add quality buttons for slow computers! But otherwise, this game is awesome!

Game is excellent!

I'm making an animation of this, but bleeping out the "hell" and "the (d word) convenient store".

This is perfect for a beginning of a lunch scene!

This is good.